22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

Here is the link to my elevator pitch:
https://youtu.be/N6NFiKFhJME

I did not receive any comments that offered a reflection for my last elevator pitch. I had my friend look it over and provide feedback, giving me an opportunity to improve. My friend told me that he thinks my hand motions are too excessive and that I do not sound like I thought the elevator pitch out. This feedback was pretty accurate and offered solid insight for what to improve going forward.

Now, I feel like I am fully prepared to give this elevator pitch in front of a business partner. I have gotten the hand movements limited and I really know and understand the substance of what I have to say. Overall, the feedback really helped me improve my pitch.